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Hey all, im Vykk. If you have a flash or audio submission and would like someone to critique it for you, I'm your man. I try to get behind the flash and actually diagnose what makes it funny or a flop. I will write FULL reviews not just two word sentences
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Agreeing with thief1337, it does get repetetive, however, I myself listen to Techno, and I have to say this had a toe tapping beat. I would try to improve on this song, maybe by adding more variations to the initial beat, maybe make the bass slightly deeper.
But it is your work, and you choose what to do with it. Hope to hear more.
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Definitely some interesting beat you have there.
But for some reason I can't seem to get it out of my head that this was inspired by Sonic's Marble Zone theme....
Author's Response:
I never played any sonic games. It's still interesting cause you're the third person to bring me that quote.
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Great Title theme beat, and I think that the lyrics were flat out funny, especially "rape your childhood" omg, too funny. Great Job.
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You call this music?
I like Zelda,butthis just butchers a great song. Like the Bowser castle one, you lose any sense of the original song in al the "techno".
Try again.
Author's Response:
k thanks. im still new to this so ill try again. i just need some practice
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Try again, but this is terrible. you can barely even hear the castle THEME in that mix of super-bass. I found it just ANNOYING.
Author's Response:
this was one of my very first songs using FL so i didnt know how it worked. im getting a little better at it ... sorry for the bass
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I agree with Obsidian Snow on most every point he brought up. There is nothing more I could say or add to that without ruining it. which pretty much sucks for me I guess because I make a habit to write detailed reviews wether something is good, or it requires constructive criticism as you can see all over NG.
All in All, Excellent work.
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Nice beat, and the lyrics made me smile too.
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like it!
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The music caught my attention, but the small segment at point 26-30 is unnecessary. it cuts off and...well leaves the listener a little gipped.
The beginning is solid, the siren caught my attention and pulled me in for the rest of the song.
other than that one complaint fore mentioned, This song is solid and I really rather enjoy it. I look forward to hearing the full version.
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I rather like this one. For reasons at this moment I care not to explain.
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Rather enjoyable piece. Consider this one, DOWNLOADED.
Keep up the awesome work.
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